Response to "Rags to riches."

I think this blog was a little more a biography. I do like however the part where it says- "When he first arrived he barely even spoke english and now he is a house hold name across the nation due to his career as a movie star and now as the governor of California." I was a little unclear about his dream though because it was not directly stated in the blog. I would maybe talk more about the things he'd done in California only, and it would be interesting to know specifically what he did in California that made him so much money. And all the reasons behind him wanting to become the Governor when he made so much money as a movie star. Did he want to pay back a state that had accepted him so greatly?

Comments

[Aidan Moon]

I am really sorry for the way I cut the piece to fit the blog. It was originally over 3 pages long and it had lots of fun facts and deep connections that I had stripped away because I wanted it to be short enough to get people's attention. Most people will see a long post or a post in really large font and pass it up, just because it wasn't visually appealing to them. Just like someone of the opposite sex. We would all like to believe that beauty is only skin deep but everyone is at least a little shallow. Assumptions are made just by the way someone looks. We assume that a handsome man or a beautiful woman has less problems than someone of the same sex that is less attractive. Also if you looked at someone and liked them at first glance you're more likely to want to talk to that person than the person who looks like he ordinary or sick. This is just my reasoning though. I may just post the entire thing, or I would've if you can edit posts. I don't know if you can edit posts or not but I've been looking for a way!

[Nina Wyszatycka]

Even though your post is "Short" i still find it interesting. Of course if you wrote more im sure that if next time you write a little more it will give a fuller detail of what you are trying to say. I just find your whole idea of what you wrote your paper on very interesting....